well, first and foremost who says you are a bad poet…. you literally wrote a nice one dear. The poem have alwys a sweet kind of emotions in them… less words but deep meaning and the same is found in urs.

No one is born as a writer or poet. So, simply be happy that you wrote it and btw nyc idea of refreshing yourself.
And most of all i loved the way you connected urself with the five basic elements of nature. Keep rocking!